I didn't expect much of it after the debacle that was the first story, but I found myself enjoying this one. It was much better written and Magnus seemed to be his usual self. So all in all, I liked it well enough but it still didn't quite meet my expectations about these short stories. I expected all the awesomeness that is Magnus and all I got is mediocre fanfiction. I'm nothing if not hopeful though, so I'll keep on hoping that it'll get great by the last one.